Can You Hear Me? Not if my eyes are shut.?

First stanza strong, second stanza first line seemed to be off on meter as I read. Interesting first line on third stanza. At first it did not make sense and then, yes! Your last stanza shortened the beats? Line 2 seemed weak to me. The last line too me is still cliche although you inserted steer. Overall, an excellent poem with much meaning. Compliments.